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Sayo · 12-29-2016, 10:23 PM

Hi dudes , how r u all
if you put everybody you'd better not use plural*
it's been a long time since the last des that i've made
It's = It has. so you need past participle form after has*
+ since is better suited cuz we don't know when was your last des's true time xD
and also bcz the forum is nearly "or almost" idle

so I've been thinking that this is the best time for me to share my newest des
Or : I think It's a good time to share my newest des with you

anyway, i'll leave you with the des and shut up

Kid :|
the overall look is stunning but unfortunately It didn't captivate my breath xD
Yet unlike urahra I really reeeeeally did like the writing and the red highlight over it
.Hmmmmm,, so I'd say good one though I know you can do waaay better than this

KEEP IT UP *^*

12-29-2016, 10:23 PM	#3
Sayo Sayo مشاهدة ملفه الشخصي إرسال رسالة خاصة إلى Sayo البحث عن المشاركات التي كتبها Sayo الـإشراف العآم .. معلومات الجوائز الإتصال رقـم العضويــة: 242839 تاريخ التسجيل: Jul 2013 الجنس: المشـــاركـات: 25,232 نقـــاط الخبـرة: 8489 الأوسمة Twitter : Deviantart :	رد: Ready ? yes Hi dudes , how r u all if you put everybody you'd better not use plural* it's been a long time since the last des that i've made It's = It has. so you need past participle form after has* + since is better suited cuz we don't know when was your last des's true time xD and also bcz the forum is nearly "or almost" idle so I've been thinking that this is the best time for me to share my newest des Or : I think It's a good time to share my newest des with you anyway, i'll leave you with the des and shut up Kid :\| the overall look is stunning but unfortunately It didn't captivate my breath xD Yet unlike urahra I really reeeeeally did like the writing and the red highlight over it .Hmmmmm,, so I'd say good one though I know you can do waaay better than this KEEP IT UP ^ . . . !? Do I look like a PERSON who cares .THE ONLY THING IN LIFE ACHIEVED WITHOUT [ EFFORT ] IS FAILURE team \| w (vip) \| Free.Gaza التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة سآيو ; 12-29-2016 الساعة 10:26 PM